Thursday, December 17, 2009

Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Back from the War Mom

My son wrote me this letter that said ,Mom I'm okay from the war , but one thing that is going to hurt you bad and that hurted me too. My uncle died from this boy that wanted me to be in his British army but I said, No !" I stared to cry.BUT ONE THING MOM I'm coming to come back home in 1 week but I still have to the British army.

The War started
The British started the fight first they were burning down the houses and we had only less people then the British. The British 1,000 people and we had 100."We need more people," said Mark."I got it," said Mark.We should go to church and we will find some boys that want to join.So we went to that church and we saw lots of boys , so we stop the church and said,Who wants to join the war with us because we need more people to come with use to beat the British." But we saw boys standing that we got so happy that we can't believe.SO every one gather their stuff and the
y were ready to have a war because the British hurt some peoples family. 4 hrs later it was night. The war was almost going to start in 3 2 1 Shot! I was in the front (Mark).I almost died in till I duck (Mark). The British army was going down but our army was not . I shot one of the officer and it was all over and we won the war! It was morning I woke up and I started to pack my stuff because I was going home! 1 hr later I was and I knock on the my look out the window and saw me and said," Your back and you are not hurt."I was glad that I was back home (Mark).

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

I'm off

My son told me that it was his last three days with us." My mom started to cry and I told her not to cry.Mom DON'T WORRY !So she stop crying .Oh Ya I forgot to tell you that I have two sisters , two brothers , and 1 son.
Our house was made of brick. We ate potato , pizza , fruit , and meat. We drink juice like apple , orange , pineapple , and soda.
My mom felt so sad that I went to the kitchen to make a surprise for my son. So I gather all the stuff I need in till my big sister came in and I told her this,''Sis go take mom somewhere so I could make a surprise party for us. While your doing that I'll go get cake , soda , balloons , candy , and party stuff.My sister went where my mom was at. Mom saw her and my sis said this,''Mom lets go get some ice cream and sit at the bench where the park is at."I was done getting stuff so, I went to my friends house and INVITED them and our cousins too.SO went back home and took all the stuff out and I ask for help and my brother Daniel help me he was 23 and I was 22 .He said ,''What is all of this .'' I replied and said,''I making a surprise party for our mom and spent and my son before he goes to the war.''So we started getting everything ready then we said ,''DONE!''that means that we were done. Then everyone that I invited was here then I called my sister and said,''Come home right now!'' So she was coming home with mom then I told everyone to hide and I turn off the light. They where coming everyone was quit then we heard foot steps coming towards us. Then they open the door and we yelled out surprise!WE started to celebrate an have fun .We played games I HAD TO CLOSE MY EYES with mask that I couldn't see with but I lost. Then it was night we cut the cake and pray like an angel.It was night it was bed time we where tired but I was thinking what should we do tomorrow I got it then I felled down on my bed and I was asleep.
day 2
It was the second day mom still felt sad but she sure did had fun yesterday.I said this to my self that we are going to go to a Golden Coral so I told every one to get ready and they did 1 hour later every one was done so we went to the car and went to Golden Coral and we sat where they told us to be at we went to get our food then 2 hour later we were done then it was night because we left at 8:00 PM then we went to the house and went to sleep.
THE 3 DAY
My son last day to spent the last day of home.Mom woke up and cried a lot that I told that my son is going to be okay . I told them that we are going to go camping. So we gather everything that we need from the house we took we went outside because we where going to do camping there. So we took all the things out and started camping.WE started build the tent
perfect the tent looks good.We were looking for wood and we found it and gather it together and fired it . It was a little chilly outside . LET'S START COOKING I made this tasting meat . 5hrs later it was night we were going to tell ghost story and make some snores. My son told this scary story that we like hearing it that I want to keep hearing it over and over again in till I fall asleep. 1hr later everyone was asleep i heard something it came out of the bushes I got scare in till it pop out and it was a bunny how scary was that .It was morning I was sad because I think that my son might not come back home. MY son was getting ready to go I told him who is going to take you they are coming to coming to pick me up .Mom they came by good luck son I said a big huge for mom okay replied my son. He left I crying so bad that I want him to home .

Thursday, November 5, 2009

The Voyage

What I smelled when I had to suffered was died bodies because they were trying to escape but they catch them.
What I ate was a little of rice,fruit,and chicken.
What I felt was getting out of that ugly place.
I watch everyone do work like I did.
In the day I have to do lots of work and they hit me with this whop so I could start working instead of being lazy because they want the crops to be done before it get dark. Then at 5:00 they say it is time to eat and they give us a little of food and I starve every single day. We have to work for 16 hours my legs get so weak that I fall down when they keep hitting me. Ten they say get up before we use the supper weapon so I get up quick and go to my room because it was time to go asleep my bed was so ruff that I couldn't go to sleep well. They wake us early in the morning and my face is with blood with some mark and in my head I was saying that I'm escaping in the night to go see my family and stay with them. It was night I act that I was asleep so everyone was asleep and I went outside quit and I got to the big fence and I clime out of the fence and I made it out of the fence.I saw the street I went to my house and I knock on the door my family is there and we start to live so happy that it was morning the mean persons went to the room and guess what the police got them to jail and everyone lived happy as they wanted.
THAT'S ALL GOT TO SAY!

Friday, October 30, 2009

DreamMakers vs Dream Breakers

I'm a Dream Maker but last year I think that I was a Dream Breaker because I think that I hurt somebody feelings . Some one in class was my best friend and Karla and I were this girl friend and then she and I stop being friends I don't know why and she told Karla not to be my friend and Karla just kept being my friend kept being friends but the in of school year she stop being my friend and I don't know why.I stop being my dreams which was singing in till she was my friend cause I was right all time.My best Carmen told me not be that girls friend that was mean to me it was not Karla but okay I should listen to my best friend Carmen she made me so feel happy that she made my dreams feel so good to me. And to the person that I broke her dreams and went to go sorry to her. That made to make people have there dreams back what you make fun to it goes back to you thank you.
A dream maker is different than a dream breaker because a dream makers always let people have their dreams and they are your best friend that will make your dreams come true and dream breakers will always lead you in the wrong side and they will break your dreams because their bad and they might do drugs. The place that I fall in was bad and I learn a lesson that your bad your dreams will never come true if your a bad person so I chose to be in the dream maker.I use to be in the dream breaker and then I relies that I'm being is a bad person and breaking people's dreams so I went to go say in my mind to be a dream maker I have show it out.When I was saying in my mind I relies that my friends were lying to me so I stop being their friend and they destroy my dreams to have lots of friends and that's all I got to say.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

amzing story


If you want to know the main characters the,y are Star , Zombie, Angel , and Kimberly.

It all started in the day when Angel and Kimberly where making Star which Star turn out to have guns in her arms . The other thing that he had was rockets in her feet.Then Angel and Kimberly were done making Star and she pop out of no where which they all got scared of each other.This is what Star said who are you? I'm Angel and Kimberly were the persons that made you which your just a robot.So that means that I'm a robot yes you are.Then Star went outside she saw Zombie he was going inside the bank which Zombie had a gun in his arm and raise it to the banker and said this give lots of money or eles I'LL kill you right in the head.Star pop of no where and said give the money back to him no I wont yes you will or your going to fight me then fight my army you ugly girl no your ugly army go fight her.So Zombie's army went to go fight her but to late for Star because Zombie escape so Star still had to fight the army she used her guns and shot one by one.Boom! boom! boom! boom!boom! boom! Star saw a little kid so she used her rockets so she can fly up because the little kid was going to fall down and said help please help me please aahhhhhhh! Star went as fast as she could fly to get the kid she was falling ahhhhhhh! so Star kept flying and she got her in time.Every one saw when Star saved the little girl the little girl stop crying and everybody clap and clap and clap then they stop.So the kid said this to Star thank you my hero.Star was proud of her self but she needs to get Zombie to jail.SO she gose out to look for Zombie and guess what she found Zombie doing an other crime he was in the store with his gun in his arm and put it up to the casher and said this to the casher give me all the money or eles I will shot you in the heart so the casher gave all money to Zombie.Star said give that money or I'll get it from you.But Zombie grab a person and it was a girl and put it on her head.

Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Tearing of the labels

What other people think about me is my attitude and that I'm cool.
What I like about myself is that I love what I do and that I have my practicability.
The labels that I have given is positive and negative .
If I live up with negative it will be easy for me in my life.Also if I live up to a positive life it will be hard for my life. Also if people make fun of you should take the easy way so you cant live with a positive way I'm just saying so take the easy way and don't let your self down by bully's just take the negative way.

Friday, September 25, 2009

What it looks like to be respectful,trustworthy,and thoughtful

Gabby is respectful to others person and she is very nice to her brothers and nice to everyone. Gabby never lies to anyone and to the teachers and she never will. She s a very thoughtful girl she thinks about good stuff and fun stuff wow I love her thoughts that she thinks about what should when we are bored. She will always be there for me and I will be there for her when she needs me.
Gabby likes to play and others stuff which i think that her favorite color is red.

Why are plants and algae important in an aquarium?

The plants and algae are important to the fish because if they don't have anything of those they wont live because they wont be able to get oxygen and they will not be able to breathe under water.That's why it is important to have have algae and plants.